Kinslayers Return {Adult Content} - Book II of the Kinslayers Saga

Ekuthh · 01-24-2007, 08:07 AM

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ElctSocket · 01-24-2007, 10:45 AM

YES! It continues! /dance :smileyhappy::smileyvery-happy:

Asp728 · 01-24-2007, 07:01 PM

Very nice! Writing two at once should be an interesting challenge for you.

niko_teen · 01-24-2007, 08:01 PM

I just knew that there was no way you could allow your self to write such a "non-evil" evil story for long before you started to miss hte kinslayers. I for one am pleased that you've picked it back up.

Raevin · 01-24-2007, 10:29 PM

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!! (No really, that's the sound I made when I saw a continuation!) Ekuth, you are my hero!

MysidiaDrakkenbane · 01-25-2007, 12:51 AM

I knew you couldn't stay away from him too long. Our Mains root themselves firmly within our own psyche and become more of a part of us than we know.

I'm glad to see you continuing this. I'll get you that Rydian History in a bit.

ChibiKitsu · 01-25-2007, 06:46 PM

Two stories at once? You're even more of a hero to me now. =DSuch a clean summary of the previous tale, and a very strong opening. Definitely looking forward to more.And very much looking forward to Scrattch. =)

dano · 01-25-2007, 09:02 PM

/dance

Danous dances with everyone ! :smileyvery-happy:

A welcomed edition :smileywink:

Jnom · 01-28-2007, 10:50 PM

Yes, Mysidia...nowadays, when I'm at work, I sometimes feel the urge to blast someone with a ball of fire... SMILEY

Darn reality...

MysidiaDrakkenbane · 01-31-2007, 06:39 PM

Hmmm... I wondered what kind of loot tables they'd have...

Marytaten · 02-03-2007, 07:04 AM

/Nef does the dance with everyone

/claps and stands Bravo!!!! More more!!! lol Great writing as usual. Can't wait for the story to continue. SMILEY

niko_teen · 02-18-2007, 11:34 AM

With my new job I'm starting to understand your pain there Ekuth. Juggle the family, the job and still trying to find time to play the game or write on the stories. So I'll still be checking in whenever i have a chance to see if anything new has been posted on either of your storylines =).

tcg23 · 02-19-2007, 12:11 PM

OMG! You are back! Thank you SO very much, I thoroughly enjoy reading any work by you Ekuth. You had me hooked on the first kinslayers, so good to see you continuing the story of the kinslayer!

Aktad · 02-20-2007, 04:28 PM

Just echoing everyone else's comments - glad to see you're back with the next story. It's a good read and I'm enjoying every bit of it! Cheers, Aktad

Ekuthh · 03-03-2007, 03:38 AM

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kyrr · 03-03-2007, 04:23 PM

*claps*

WEEEE I'm so glad Scrattch is back!

Ekuthh · 03-05-2007, 10:17 AM

Thank you Blue.

At least someone noticed I had written...

*sniff*

...

*sniff*

niko_teen · 03-05-2007, 08:37 PM

/claps very nice but nothing that i wouldn't have expected from Ekuth. I'll do my best to not start zenning but i like the foreshadowing of the daughter. I really wanna see how this turns out, she does have that peticular soul within her

Ekuthh · 03-05-2007, 08:50 PM

Thank you niko- it means alot that with your schedule you still keep up on the tale.

Now which soul would that be?

*looks innocent*

valkry · 03-05-2007, 09:47 PM

I'm here too, just usual RL issues (two nights of being woke-up by puking kid, I guess I should be glad they aren't both yucky at same time, but tough on sleep) and unusual RL issues (will be off-line this week-end for out-state trip SMILEY

). That & now niko has me a bit paranoid about my 'zenning' threads, so I'm afraid to comment and force re-writes. (I STILL want to know what happened to the infant son/daughter's soul though .)

Ekuthh · 03-06-2007, 03:42 AM

Hmm? Soul? Is there a soul I forgot about?

Leave a loose end?

Me?

SMILEY

Besides, I don't rewrite. I adapt.

niko_teen · 03-06-2007, 09:39 AM

Wasn't it a different soul that he used? the soul of what's her name there. And the soul of the unborn child was used for power. The whole savor the flavor of the innocent part.

As to stopping by it's not like i can stop myself =). It took a few days to finish reading the post on three seperate occasions but it was well worth the trouble. As I've said before I have my favorite authors that i have to stop in and check up on no matter how hectic things are being

valkry · 03-06-2007, 03:10 PM

Tea, Darling, you really really need to work on your Teir'Dal hate issues....just cause we are 'evil' doesn't mean we don't care about our kids and want to see them do the best they can...we just have different motives then you 'goodies'. You don't use your own kids for a power source...that's what other folk's kids are for. Granted being a disembodied soul does limit the colleges Am Jr can get accepted too (although having Dad on the faculty couldn't hurt with the mage guild) and future career options, but Dad's already worked the basics of resouling a body....

Ekuthh · 03-06-2007, 04:27 PM

Not to add more fuel to the speculation, but... SMILEY

Noitul nodded sympathetically.

"And you will continue to do so, until you die. It is a battle now, Ambrosious. A battle of wills- hers against your own. The child... is inert. Powerless. She will use its energy against you though. You must learn to control it, control her- or you will lose the battle, your body and your mind."

Taken from Kinslayers Tale, Chapter Fifty-One (emphasis added)

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Further, Ambrosious or any other true Tier'Dal would NEVER resurrect or claim Kinship with the soul of a child whose mother was the product of and participated in incestuous relationships. House Y'tsul was eradicated for that very reason. Ambrosious simply found an... interesting way to deal with the soul of the final member of the House.

dano · 03-12-2007, 10:51 AM

YAY and well done.. this is something that I keep checking whenever I can to see if there is more... happy now SMILEY

I WANT MORE :@

MysidiaDrakkenbane · 03-12-2007, 04:39 PM

I'm glad to see you still writing. I half expected to see a bottle of Rydian Ale on Ambrosious' desk as a gift.

*Blows the cobwebs off of her own writing desk* ... now to find my ambition... *looks in a few drawers*

Alycs · 03-13-2007, 01:52 AM

I do so love your writing!

TantrumX · 03-13-2007, 10:14 AM

First time stopping by a writers/roleplayers forum and honestly I'm glad I did. I just clicked a title thread near the top. This was so interesting im thinking of looking up more of your work. It has also stirred up a reason for me to create a bio/background for my own main character to add more depth to an already deep game. I"ll definitley be stopping by here more often. Like the others have said, great job and I can't wait to see more.

Ekuthh · 03-13-2007, 07:22 PM

Mysidia! Good to see you back. Now get writing or else...

*looks for cat-o-ninetails*

Yes, I'm writing. Sporadically, but still at it. Work isn't allowing much creative time, but the bills are getting paid...

Thanks Alycs!

TantrumX: Welcome to the forums! You'll find alot of great stories here. This thread is part two of my magnum opus. Read Kinslayer's Tale first to get the full background on what's going on. Kinslayer's Return continues the saga that will be completed in Book III (eventually).

I'm also penning Pawn of Fate simultaneously, to cover the other side of the spectrum... lol.

Again, welcome aboard, and thank you for the comments!

ToejaM t · 03-15-2007, 08:46 PM

My name on these forums seems to constantly change so I will just say I am ToejaM tbh. I hope you remember me! SMILEY

Its good to see you're writing more Kinslayer! I wasn't quite sure I would get back into it again but its flowing very nicely and things are coming back from the previous book. I look forward to reading more and as ever you're leaving me wanting to read more. Keep up the good work. I have read the first two entrys of Pawn of Fate though but recently been quite busy with real life things to comment. I'm about to head that way to see if you have added anything else yet SMILEY

01-24-2007, 10:45 AM	#2
ElctSocket Loremaster Join Date: Feb 2005 Posts: 222	YES! It continues! /dance :smileyhappy::smileyvery-happy: __________________ ___________________________ That's the Infamous Biagio to you

01-24-2007, 08:01 PM	#4
niko_teen Loremaster Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: DC baby! Posts: 1,545	I just knew that there was no way you could allow your self to write such a "non-evil" evil story for long before you started to miss hte kinslayers. I for one am pleased that you've picked it back up. __________________ The often Misinterpreted and always Grumpy Ranger As SOE and I disagree on creative rights my series can be found at: theshattering.com

01-24-2007, 10:29 PM	#5
Raevin Loremaster Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 113	EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!! (No really, that's the sound I made when I saw a continuation!) Ekuth, you are my hero! __________________

01-28-2007, 10:50 PM	#9
Jnom Loremaster Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 80	Yes, Mysidia...nowadays, when I'm at work, I sometimes feel the urge to blast someone with a ball of fire... Darn reality...

02-03-2007, 07:04 AM	#11
Marytaten Loremaster Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 73	/Nef does the dance with everyone /claps and stands Bravo!!!! More more!!! lol Great writing as usual. Can't wait for the story to continue. __________________ Neferteti 90 Kerran Defiler

01-24-2007, 08:07 AM	#1
Ekuthh Loremaster Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Aridzona, USA Posts: 711	.

01-24-2007, 07:01 PM	#3
Asp728 Loremaster Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 306	Very nice! Writing two at once should be an interesting challenge for you.

01-25-2007, 12:51 AM	#6
MysidiaDrakkenbane Loremaster Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: New Jersey Posts: 570	I knew you couldn't stay away from him too long. Our Mains root themselves firmly within our own psyche and become more of a part of us than we know. I'm glad to see you continuing this. I'll get you that Rydian History in a bit.

01-25-2007, 06:46 PM	#7
ChibiKitsu Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Florida Posts: 18	Two stories at once? You're even more of a hero to me now. =DSuch a clean summary of the previous tale, and a very strong opening. Definitely looking forward to more.And very much looking forward to Scrattch. =)

01-25-2007, 09:02 PM	#8
dano General Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 217	/dance Danous dances with everyone ! :smileyvery-happy: A welcomed edition :smileywink:

01-31-2007, 06:39 PM	#10
MysidiaDrakkenbane Loremaster Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: New Jersey Posts: 570	Hmmm... I wondered what kind of loot tables they'd have...

02-18-2007, 11:34 AM	#12
niko_teen Loremaster Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: DC baby! Posts: 1,545	With my new job I'm starting to understand your pain there Ekuth. Juggle the family, the job and still trying to find time to play the game or write on the stories. So I'll still be checking in whenever i have a chance to see if anything new has been posted on either of your storylines =). __________________ The often Misinterpreted and always Grumpy Ranger As SOE and I disagree on creative rights my series can be found at: theshattering.com

02-19-2007, 12:11 PM	#13
tcg23 Loremaster Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 94	OMG! You are back! Thank you SO very much, I thoroughly enjoy reading any work by you Ekuth. You had me hooked on the first kinslayers, so good to see you continuing the story of the kinslayer!

02-20-2007, 04:28 PM	#14
Aktad Loremaster Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 9	Just echoing everyone else's comments - glad to see you're back with the next story. It's a good read and I'm enjoying every bit of it! Cheers, Aktad

03-03-2007, 03:38 AM	#15
Ekuthh Loremaster Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Aridzona, USA Posts: 711	.

03-03-2007, 04:23 PM	#16
kyrr General Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 446	claps WEEEE I'm so glad Scrattch is back!

03-05-2007, 10:17 AM	#17
Ekuthh Loremaster Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Aridzona, USA Posts: 711	Thank you Blue. At least *someone* noticed I had written... sniff sniff ... sniff

03-05-2007, 08:37 PM	#18
niko_teen Loremaster Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: DC baby! Posts: 1,545	/claps very nice but nothing that i wouldn't have expected from Ekuth. I'll do my best to not start zenning but i like the foreshadowing of the daughter. I really wanna see how this turns out, she does have that peticular soul within her __________________ The often Misinterpreted and always Grumpy Ranger As SOE and I disagree on creative rights my series can be found at: theshattering.com

03-05-2007, 08:50 PM	#19
Ekuthh Loremaster Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Aridzona, USA Posts: 711	Thank you niko- it means alot that with your schedule you still keep up on the tale. Now which soul would that be? looks innocent

03-05-2007, 09:47 PM	#20
valkry Gnombie!! Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Minneapolis, MN USA Posts: 1,321	I'm here too, just usual RL issues (two nights of being woke-up by puking kid, I guess I should be glad they aren't both yucky at same time, but tough on sleep) and unusual RL issues (will be off-line this week-end for out-state trip ). That & now niko has me a bit paranoid about my 'zenning' threads, so I'm afraid to comment and force re-writes. (I STILL want to know what happened to the infant son/daughter's soul though .) __________________

03-06-2007, 03:42 AM	#21
Ekuthh Loremaster Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Aridzona, USA Posts: 711	Hmm? Soul? Is there a soul I forgot about? Leave a loose end? Me? Besides, I don't rewrite. I adapt.

03-06-2007, 09:39 AM	#22
niko_teen Loremaster Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: DC baby! Posts: 1,545	Wasn't it a different soul that he used? the soul of what's her name there. And the soul of the unborn child was used for power. The whole savor the flavor of the innocent part. As to stopping by it's not like i can stop myself =). It took a few days to finish reading the post on three seperate occasions but it was well worth the trouble. As I've said before I have my favorite authors that i have to stop in and check up on no matter how hectic things are being __________________ The often Misinterpreted and always Grumpy Ranger As SOE and I disagree on creative rights my series can be found at: theshattering.com

03-06-2007, 03:10 PM	#23
valkry Gnombie!! Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Minneapolis, MN USA Posts: 1,321	Tea, Darling, you really really need to work on your Teir'Dal hate issues....just cause we are 'evil' doesn't mean we don't care about our kids and want to see them do the best they can...we just have different motives then you 'goodies'. You don't use your own kids for a power source...that's what other folk's kids are for. Granted being a disembodied soul does limit the colleges Am Jr can get accepted too (although having Dad on the faculty couldn't hurt with the mage guild) and future career options, but Dad's already worked the basics of resouling a body.... __________________

03-06-2007, 04:27 PM	#24
Ekuthh Loremaster Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Aridzona, USA Posts: 711	Not to add more fuel to the speculation, but... Noitul nodded sympathetically. "And you will continue to do so, until you die. It is a battle now, Ambrosious. A battle of wills- hers against your own. The child... is inert. Powerless. She will use its energy against you though. You must learn to control it, control her- or you will lose the battle, your body and your mind." Taken from Kinslayers Tale, Chapter Fifty-One (emphasis added) ... Further, Ambrosious or any other true Tier'Dal would NEVER resurrect or claim Kinship with the soul of a child whose mother was the product of and participated in incestuous relationships. House Y'tsul was eradicated for that very reason. Ambrosious simply found an... interesting way to deal with the soul of the final member of the House.

03-12-2007, 10:51 AM	#25
dano General Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 217	YAY and well done.. this is something that I keep checking whenever I can to see if there is more... happy now I WANT MORE :@

03-12-2007, 04:39 PM	#26
MysidiaDrakkenbane Loremaster Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: New Jersey Posts: 570	I'm glad to see you still writing. I half expected to see a bottle of Rydian Ale on Ambrosious' desk as a gift. Blows the cobwebs off of her own writing desk ... now to find my ambition... looks in a few drawers

03-13-2007, 01:52 AM	#27
Alycs Loremaster Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 357	I do so love your writing! __________________ By alycss at 2009-01-15

03-13-2007, 10:14 AM	#28
TantrumX Loremaster Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Japan...stationed Posts: 18	First time stopping by a writers/roleplayers forum and honestly I'm glad I did. I just clicked a title thread near the top. This was so interesting im thinking of looking up more of your work. It has also stirred up a reason for me to create a bio/background for my own main character to add more depth to an already deep game. I"ll definitley be stopping by here more often. Like the others have said, great job and I can't wait to see more.

03-13-2007, 07:22 PM	#29
Ekuthh Loremaster Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Aridzona, USA Posts: 711	Mysidia! Good to see you back. Now get writing or else... looks for cat-o-ninetails Yes, I'm writing. Sporadically, but still at it. Work isn't allowing much creative time, but the bills are getting paid... Thanks Alycs! TantrumX: Welcome to the forums! You'll find alot of great stories here. This thread is part two of my magnum opus. Read Kinslayer's Tale first to get the full background on what's going on. Kinslayer's Return continues the saga that will be completed in Book III (eventually). I'm also penning Pawn of Fate simultaneously, to cover the other side of the spectrum... lol. Again, welcome aboard, and thank you for the comments!

03-15-2007, 08:46 PM	#30
ToejaM t General Join Date: Dec 2004 Posts: 121	My name on these forums seems to constantly change so I will just say I am ToejaM tbh. I hope you remember me! Its good to see you're writing more Kinslayer! I wasn't quite sure I would get back into it again but its flowing very nicely and things are coming back from the previous book. I look forward to reading more and as ever you're leaving me wanting to read more. Keep up the good work. I have read the first two entrys of Pawn of Fate though but recently been quite busy with real life things to comment. I'm about to head that way to see if you have added anything else yet