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Old 11-19-2017, 03:43 AM   #10
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Quest: Why Don't the Ayriegales Sing"
Quest giver: Jansell
NPC: Khiturfu

Khiturfu says "The memories of our kind is long enough that it might well be eternal" - Should either be "The memory of our kind is..." (singular "memory" to match the rest of the sentence) or "The memories of our kind are long enough that they might well be" (changing the second half to match the plural "memories").

Another "ingus" (rather than "ignus"): I say to Khiturfu, "Hmm... the ingus there, perhaps?"

Khiturfu: "There is merit in it's idea." - Should be "its" (no apostrophe).
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