valkry
10-17-2008, 09:45 AM
<p>Nice intro and characgter set-up. But could I beg for paragraphs? </p><p>I LOVE stream-of-conciousness stories, but the periodic breaks provided by paragraphs make the story physically less difficult to read for the eyes. I'd hate to see anyone skip the tale, just because the letters jumble together (esp for slightly older folks like me). </p><p>Hope to see more soon.</p>
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