niko_teen
06-19-2008, 10:25 PM
From time to time I write out a scene that i absoultly adore. The problem comes when i cannot find a way to incorperate said scene into the current story. Until now I'd just delete the scene feeling a minor sense of loss and move on. This last scene though, I laughed so hard for so long that I couldn't just get ride of it. So from this point when i have a scene that I cherish but cannot use I can always throw them in here. That and well modify some of the other scene that I cannot help but poke fun at.
niko_teen
06-19-2008, 10:29 PM
<p>Book III Chapter III</p><p> I had planned on maybe sending Teaeran to conducto gorilla opperations on the orc horde in the Karana Plains. Unfortionately the plot got taken in a different direction and this scene was dropped.</p><p>"William you know me and know that I need to do this," Teaeran said in an almost pleading tone of voice.</p><p>William nodded feeling Teaeran's pain as if it was his own.</p><p>"Sign the special mission volunteer sheet. That way I can reinstate your previous rank," William instructed.</p><p>With her arms folded beneath her arms Yeenya scowled at Teaeran's back. She knew that he needed to go for his own mental health but that did little to mend the hurt that she felt.</p><p>Even since Rose had gone missing Teaeran had obsessed over finding her. Taking insane assignments over and over again as a means to find out more information about what had happened to her.</p><p>"Teaeran this is [I cannot control my vocabulary]," Yeenya scowled.</p><p>"Not now," Teaeran said only partially listening to what Yeenya was rambling about.</p><p>"Teaeran," William said is a low tone.</p><p>"Yes?"</p><p>"You should listen to your wife."</p><p>Frowning slightly Teaeran placed the quill back into the ink well.</p><p>"I appreciate all that you've done, but you've done twice as much as anyone else."</p><p>"Either you send me or I'll go myself."</p><p>Sighing slightly William waved Teaeran off signaling that he was fine to leave.</p><p>"I'm going to," Yeenya stated as she compressed her brows in a less then happy facial expression.</p><p>"Not you're not," Teaeran responded simply as he stepped out of the door leaving the office.</p><p>Shooting a look at Teaeran's back sharp enough to cut glass She took three brisk steps across the room and had already signed her name to the book before Teaeran had even looked over his shoulder to check on her.</p><p>"What in the nine hells did you do woman," Teaeran shouted at her.</p><p>Ignoring Teaeran Yeenya leaned over the desk toward William.</p><p>"Send me with him."</p><p>William only laughed as he tilted to the side to look at Teaeran standing there with a dumbfounded look on his face.</p><p>"[I cannot control my vocabulary] it," Yeenya nearly shouted as she slapped her hand on the desk. "Order him and he'll do what you say.</p><p>"He always does," Yeenya added a moment later after a half second pause.</p><p>Cocking his brow William watched as Teaeran's face change to a sly smirk.</p><p>"Make her a clerk," Teaeran requested.</p><p>"What?," Yeenya sounded off in an exasperated tone of voice as she turned toward him.</p><p>"If she wants to join the Army let her," Teaeran smirked. "Just make her a clerk."</p><p>"Done," William spoke quickly as he pulled the tome across the desk to write in ‘clerk' after Yeenya's name.</p><p>Smiling smugly Teaeran held the door open for Yeenya as she stomped out of the General's office.</p><p>"Don't even bother coming upstairs tonight," Yeenya hissed at Teaeran. "You can sleep on the floor with the dogs."</p><p>Teaeran let out a short sigh as the grin faded from his face.</p>
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