"The Upset Part One" My first movie of all!

[xx]

<DIV>This is my first movie of all please comment on the bad and good stuff so i know what i did good and what i did badly.  TY</DIV> <DIV> </DIV> <DIV><A href="http://files.filefront.com//;6510049;;/" target=_blank>http://files.filefront.com//;6510049;;/</A></DIV> <DIV> </DIV> <DIV><A href="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JINhQU9ybPQ" target=_blank>http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JINhQU9ybPQ</A></DIV> <DIV> </DIV> <DIV>PS.Keep in mid it might take awhile to load</DIV><p>Message Edited by xx14 on <span class=date_text>01-10-2007</span> <span class=time_text>08:08 PM</span>

[Cersiana]

<P><FONT face="Comic Sans MS" color=#99ffcc>Well hun It's a cute story but. Here's a few things.</FONT></P> <P><FONT face="Comic Sans MS" color=#99ffcc>f10 - you can toggle all your stuff off your screen if you hit it twice. I knowticed you used run/walk hit Shift R  ^_^ </FONT><FONT face="Comic Sans MS" color=#99ffcc>You can also turn off a lotta the over head text by going into your options menu. User Interface I believe. The music you choose has a huge impact on the movie hun. </FONT><FONT face="Comic Sans MS" color=#99ffcc>But for it to be your first movie you had nice camera angles imo. Better than anything I could ever do ^_^. Hope that helps and you make another soon. </FONT></P>

[cba3]

<P>Thats some good advice from Ivori there.  It was a good story.  Good that you thought of a story line to act out rather than just random fighting shots strung together that you so often see.</P> <P>I would give you 2 pointers.  The first as Ivori mentioned is music.  A good song would have added a lot to your film.  On Fraps there is a check box to record sound.  Make sure that is UNticked and you wont record in game sound then you can add your own music with your editing software.</P> <P>The second thing is the targeting arrows, rings and glow.  Under options and user interface you can uncheck all 3 of these, and you can target people to get the right head movements and emotes without the unsightly arrows.  The glow is particularly annoying because even if you havent targeted someone, if you mouse over a person, npc or door youll get a glow (something i learned the hard way from my first movies <img src="/smilies/3b63d1616c5dfcf29f8a7a031aaa7cad.gif" border="0" alt="SMILEY" />  )</P> <P>All in all a good first film.  </P> <P>Mori</P>

[Irr]

<DIV>I want to start by saying welcome to the world of movie making!</DIV> <DIV>It's a fine first entry.  The others who posted gave some great advice!</DIV> <DIV>If I had one thing to suggest myself, it would be adding character depth.</DIV> <DIV>They were in love, and suddenly he kills her AND LAUGHS?!  I was a little thrown by that.</DIV> <DIV>I'm sure since this was called "Part 1"  We'll see more into this story, but you should take some time</DIV> <DIV>and capture the emotes between the characters.  I would have liked to known what was going through</DIV> <DIV>his head as he killed her.</DIV> <DIV> </DIV> <DIV>Other than that, you had some good camera angles, and the music did fit in some parts.  Great job, and I hope to see more!</DIV>

[xx]

<DIV>Ty all!</DIV> <DIV> </DIV> <DIV>Well i will make another movie but i need some ideas. i have no other music i found that stuff in the EQ2 folder. Oh and im a little young bout 13 now. So im not doing everything perfect but i am learning from other videos. Like some of Irras's,Zemifra's,and Zilreed's movies. ok again TY all and if u have any ideas for the next movie please PM me and we will talk. all welcome to PM me. And maybe if its good i might need a little bit more actors! So Again ty for the advice and i am here to stay in movie making!!!!!<BR></DIV> <DIV>Sincerely,</DIV> <DIV>                xx14<BR> <BLOCKQUOTE> </BLOCKQUOTE><BR></DIV><p>Message Edited by xx14 on <span class=date_text>01-11-2007</span> <span class=time_text>10:29 AM</span>

[Irr]

<BR> <BLOCKQUOTE> <HR> xx14 wrote: <DIV> </DIV> <DIV>i am here to stay in movie making!!!!!<BR></DIV> <HR> </BLOCKQUOTE><BR>Awesome!  I'll be looking for the sequel!

[xx]

<DIV>Well ill need some volenteers for the next movie!  So send in those persanol messages!</DIV>

[xx]

<DIV>Im also thinking about redoing Part one. Who agrees with me on that????</DIV>

[Zeek14]

<DIV>OH i was in that movie im his brother im ocade hi all im defenitly in part two or if we redo part one im in. It will be awsome!!!!! When we doing it if we are?????</DIV>

[xx]

<DIV>Hey Bro ya u can be in the next movie but i need ideas for the next movie so that leads to a problem.  And idk if im ganna redo the first one. so u can see why we have to wait abit.</DIV> <DIV> </DIV> <DIV>XX14</DIV>

[cba3]

<P>Your guild will be the place to collar in extra actors.  You will find most people very willing and excited to be in your movie <img src="/smilies/3b63d1616c5dfcf29f8a7a031aaa7cad.gif" border="0" alt="SMILEY" />  Failing that, for random extras, just do an /ooc in the zone you chose to film in and there will usually be a few people hanging around doing nothing.  Promise them credit in your film at the end and they will be happy to help out.</P> <P>For the story line, perhaps he could regret killing her and end up killing himself,... or as a twist it could be his evil twin brother that did it and he could go on to hunt this twin down for revenge.. perhaps kill the twin brothers love?  You could ask your brother to create a new toon that looks just like you to be the twin.</P> <P>Looking forward to your next movie <img src="/smilies/3b63d1616c5dfcf29f8a7a031aaa7cad.gif" border="0" alt="SMILEY" /></P> <P>Mori</P>

[kajirala]

he made another movie...it makes more sense...i should know i derected it

[Badaxe Ba]

Spellcheck (in the movie) wouldn't hurt either.   <p>Message Edited by Badaxe Bart on <span class=date_text>01-18-2007</span> <span class=time_text>02:40 PM</span>

[kajirala]

are you talking to me or xx14

[xx]

probabaly me