Looking for some crituque on a WIP

[EDofEDs]

<img src="http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v292/jaxomdad/CSFInkWIP.jpg">Original Pencils by <a href="http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/41543565/?qo=9&q=by%3Adpragan&qh=sort%3Atime+-in%3Ascraps" target=_blank>DPRagan</a> known on the boards here as ZabjadeDone in CS2 entirely with a mouse.Im trying somethign a bit new with this where instead of inking as if its going to be colored I'm inking for the final piece.  I'm using a sort of sketch like aproach with shading and I'm not sure if its working out.  Call it self doubt, but for some reason I can't decide if it looks like shading of scribbling so I am tossing it out there to see what people think of the direction I'm taking.Feedback is HIGHLY encouraged!<div></div>

[BSbon]

looks like shading to me

[Neldoreth]

I won't be too much help for you....whatever you chose, I just want to say it looks good the way it is ;p I know it's not finished, but I love unfinished drawings...hmmm maybe that's why I didin't make it? LOL <span>:smileysurprised:</span> <span>:smileyvery-happy:</span> <span>:smileywink:</span><div></div>

[Zabjade]

<div></div><font color="#66ff00"><font size="2"><font face="Comic Sans MS">Looks good so far ^_^ not an EQ2 pic(Kerra don't have lush hair lol) , but looking good. <a href="http://eqiiforums.station.sony.com/eq2/board/message?board.id=screen&message.id=19477" target=_blank>My art thread in this forum.</a> </font></font></font><div></div><p>Message Edited by Zabjade on <span class=date_text>10-30-2006</span> <span class=time_text>03:43 AM</span>

[silvername]

I like it. <img src="/smilies/3b63d1616c5dfcf29f8a7a031aaa7cad.gif" border="0" alt="SMILEY" />

[Zabjade]

<font color="#66ff00"><font size="2"><font face="Comic Sans MS">You need to finish it hehe, hmm I found the captioned version of "Cat Scratch Fever" but I haven't reposted it yet, I plan to finish coloring "Incidental Latex" first </font></font></font><div></div>

[Cersiana]

<DIV><FONT face="Comic Sans MS" color=#99ff99 size=2>Personally I think it looks very nice. While as I prefer a colored over a non colored picture you have a really good line art here. The shading is very nice imo it doesn't just look like scribbles  ^_^ Love the hair and eyes.</FONT></DIV>