"All In A Day's Work" - movie staring my assassin (movie link)

[Chizreelo]

<div></div><div></div>My first attempt at an game movie. Be kind <span>:smileyhappy:</span><a href="http://files.filefront.com/ChizSpywmv/;4555007;;/fileinfo.html" target=_blank>All In A Day's Work</a><div></div><p><span class="time_text"></span></p><p>Message Edited by Chizreelo on <span class=date_text>01-02-2006</span> <span class=time_text>04:54 PM</span>

[Zah]

<DIV>I liked it, wouldn't mind seeing a few more</DIV><p>Message Edited by Zahas on <span class=date_text>01-04-2006</span> <span class=time_text>04:43 PM</span>

[odellp]

Good vid, I liked the heated talk with the dude on the roof. <div></div>

[Chizreelo]

This was my first movie, any constructive criticism out there?What should I try to improve upon?What should I keep?What did I do right?What did I do wrong?Almost 90 downloads but only two replies. I had fun making this but I want to improve, help me out here.<div></div>

[Valirmon]

<div>I thought it was really well done.</div><div> </div><div>From a viewer's perspective, some of the scenes were pretty laggy, especially those with more movement.  Not much you can do about that if you want to maintain the quality other than try to tone down some of the particle effects, and maybe some of the graphics you don't really feel you need for "realism".</div><div> </div><div>You used the emotes perfectly, though it was a little difficult following exactly what was going on.  Perhaps some voice-over or some text (perhaps dialogue boxes) to clue some of the more clueless (like me) audience in to what's really going down.</div><div> </div><div>Your music was great, and it fit with the scenes and the feel really well, imo.</div><div> </div><div>All in all a great job, especially for a first movie.  I enjoyed it.</div>