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Bleusong
08-08-2006, 12:58 PM
<div></div><div></div><div></div><div></div><div></div><div></div>    -1-Land above Norrath     He stood alone in another plane staring at the peak far ahead shrouded by clouds, but he has seen this landscape before.  He has been walking and climbing hours feeling the heat in his lungs and ignoring the exhaustion.  He is being called, though he isn't aware how.  He tries to catch his breath but air is thin now.     'Huuu, found it...this is the place...where demi called me in the dreams'     He begins to laugh as he chokes unable to steady his breath as he raises his hand to hover before his face, elbow bent in posture of victory.     'Haaat, it's a success!'     In euphoria of journey complete, he didn't notice the rock that was thrown at him, <i>sshhhhtttt~ pat!  </i>He falls forward in attempt to dodge the projectial accompanied by,     'You think !?'     He turns to face his enemy with a quick tilt of his head asking,     'What's this?'     And <i>paah-at! </i>He falls on his face as the 2nd well-aimed rock scores squarely between his eyes.  He goes down on his knees arms reaching for the sky, ...!!     'Kah-ha, sorry you idiot, you'll have to come with us!'     -North end of the plane-         Stone structures created by rocks, heart shaped(literally, not like cute I *heart* you heart) sprouting from this land of sky with radish like legs anchoring it. The sky is clear except for few thin strands of clouds traveling absent mindedly     -More specifically, Land of Arisa-      -[expletive haxx0red by Raijinn] it... Course the gate has to close.... If I don't drag this kid back down, the tribunal is going to raise hell     A creature thinks as he spins his tail in his hand absent mindedly, out of frustration he begins to press a point looking at his now recovering prisoner.  The creature is red, sporting a white mohawk, face aged with trials of a demon with a chipped horn and another horn still preserved.  He is dressed in a formalwear too sizes too small for his short stubby body.     'You're going back to Norrath without a peep? Okay? And especially, no more head strung antics like this one.'     Retaliation ensues shortly,     'No- what are you to tell me- I am not leaving!'     -Huh, looks at this kid, barking like a dog not realizing where he is? Alright, let's just see.  Once we're safely back down, I'm making sure his life is living hell.  For least  a month.     Stunned and half-threatened-half in-disarray creature stares back eyes in a glare though the boy casually adjusts his glasses once more pondering the name 'Demica'     -Though breaking the law of the living is a serious crime, I'll let it go since I understand your heart     'Becareful...from now on.  Understand?'    Creature asks trying to change the tactics now, preppy.  A cry of angar,     'Get away from me- YOU TOAD!...'    The demon scoots closer slowly, making sure the boy gets good look at his calmly demenor because he understands the pain.    'Heh heh..cute kid, forget all this, give up, I will help you...'    His leg shakes, in his mind he is counting to ten trying to keep his demonic angar in check.    Relentless reply,    'I, I told you, toad, no!'    -T...O...A...D...?? grr.    'Give...Up...'    'If you disobey me, you are finished! If i get angry, I will report this to the tribunal and forever ban you from ever returning to the land of the living!'    The demon tries his best threatening pose, holidng his pointy triangle tipped tail as a blade.    'Do as you wish.'    Came a reply, though it's clear the heart is no where near present.  Speechless, the demon thinks furiously about why this humanoid refuses to shy away from a demon.    'Please don't do this, if you do this, it agonizes me as well.  You aren't even dead yet, crawling here alone, what do you believe you'll accomplish?  Think about this, do you think Demica, whom may be judge unfavorably for calling you here would be able to rest her heart comfortably watching break the basic living law and the land of the plane to come up here?  This will surely only pain her! If she came for you, how sad would you be ? For Demi, hm?'    No response as if the soul itself has been stolen away staring in to the oblivion.    '...'    'Just give up, I will personally hook you up with girls in the future-'    To this there came a little bit of life,    'I...could never...forget, this girl...'    -GRRRRR~ Ah That's it    'You useless child, if I was in charge you would be so dead already, you disrespectful!  If you loved her, cherished her, you should live stronger and fight against the...bah! Someone like you doesn't deserved to know love, you deserver a beating'    <i>paht, puck. </i>Beating ensues.  It is interrupted soon by a bottom-heavy sprite, frantic his wings flapping madly, <i>patpatpatpat.    '</i>hm?<i>'    '</i>Toad...Toad! This is not good, not...'    'You! [expletive haxx0red by Raijinn] it! How can a sprite be gone so long just to take a.  There's no time let's drag this [Removed for Content] back down to the living'    The prisoner lays flat on his back, eyes bruised arms stretched passed out from the senseless beating.  The sprint points frantically,    'Toadtoad! Look there, oh, scary scary! hak, run... run.    'What did you see to create such a fuss..Ooot-'    The demon turns in time to catch the sight of the threat, his tail slowly raising away from the incoming in a furtive gesture while the sprite begins to fly away having trouble holding its own weight with its too-small wings.      <i>Do.Do.Do. Kuaaaaaaaah.  </i>The sound is unmistakable, the beings wielding axes with fangs clad in armor primitive, but with spikes.  Mounts baring razer sharp teeth too many to count, their manes trailing their heads wildly and head adorned accordingly with, spikes.    'Soul Hunters!!' * - * - *     I do intend to continue the story when I feel like it.  I've never written a full story before other than something short and sweet to impress a honey.  I appreciate anyone that has taken the time to read even just this much, thank you.<div></div><p>Message Edited by Bleusong on <span class="date_text">08-08-2006</span> <span class="time_text">02:25 AM</span></p><p>Message Edited by Bleusong on <span class=date_text>08-08-2006</span> <span class=time_text>02:28 AM</span>

PookaSma
08-08-2006, 07:21 PM
<DIV>Bleu, this is just wonderful! I'm at work, and slacking (as opposed to being actually bored) so I don't have time to say much more at the moment...so I will Iater then.</DIV> <DIV> </DIV> <DIV>More more more! You can't leave us with a cliffhanger!</DIV> <DIV> </DIV> <DIV>~ Ky</DIV>

Bleusong
08-09-2006, 10:09 AM
<div></div>Boy begins to sit up his head still hurting from senseless violence he had suffered while Toad with his tail high drops cold sweat his jaw opened in fear at the sight."No! to die here so meaninglessly..."<i>Khaat...Ahh..AT</i>...The sound of danger approaches."Hey! We must absolutely bolt!'Frantically waving his arms and with the hunters the clouds seem to come.  Defiant boy faces the red vertically challenged demon his nosturals flaring and oblivious, 'Hey, try that again, you...T...O...A...D'<i>Do..Do..Do..Khaaaa..</i>'Um..., Uh, are you deaf?... Get up'Another defiant sigh,'Don't care, no one is going to stop me''Egad..., Right now that is not the prob... !'Hunter's mount, furious, thunders down upon Toad it's shark teeths barely missing and burrows the dry land.'Kweh-ek!'Toad leaps aways his pointy red tail waving frantically.   The ruckus finally gets the boys attention his will suddenly shattering like glass as his eyes focus thin like a shrimp."Welcome to the Plane, tsktsk... How sad, you came here at such a young age... Still ye not be afraid, we'll take you someplace nice'Toad comes to the rescue, his legs wably, points to the boy'Uh... Sir, this boy, is about to... Like about to go back to the living..'<div></div>'What the, you don't look tasty at all, crap! Oh well'The hunter replies, his fangs glaring under his horned skull helm.  Commands his deadly steed,'Jweh-Bo, that thing is your dinner.'<i>Khaa-at.</i>  It's maw opening now, his countless teeth glaring chases after the little red thing now running without even a glance, his eyes popping out to the sky at speed.'Haha, pretty fast shorty, fine that this kid is first.'-oop, if I leave Bleu behind...The mount ponders if the kid is small enought to be bite-size as he opens his mouth.'Fulgur!'<i>Pah-ang, pah, pah, pah, pah, pah.  </i>Lightning divides the land, splits the land.  The Soul Hunter's steed never knew what hit it as a blade pierces it's jaw and arches across the sky to its owner.'...!?''What the...what was that''It's fast that way''Get it, let's kill it!'<i>Paht. </i> Blade landed upon a girl held high in her grip, emerging after the dust had settled.  Her features  radiant, determined, and perfect.  Her hair flowed dark though boun as though it a fromed from the bluest night sky.  She wore leather armor protecting her chest and shoulder pads that resembled turtle shells.  Her short skirt matched her knee high boots with large trinity of ruby studs on each piece.'uh that is...''Kyeara!'Her eyes sparkle, jaw set in angar,'I've cleared warned you... Not to ever step foot upon Arisa's land...'-I just want to go home...The demon cries, though usually he looks much more devil's spawn.'You insolent, you dare..My precious mount Jweh-Bo'Mountless Soul Hunter cries as well.'Don't cry Toad.'-But it tried to eat me with just a bite....'It's ugly to cry'The sprite now resting comfortably on a giant but harmless white-furred beast consoles.  Toad glares at the little winged guy,'[Removed for Content], running away alone'-!!The devil notices the giant white furred beast least the size of a small home.'Say hi, it's Morf, Morf!'Meanwhile, Soul Hunters are dying,'Trash like you does not match Arisa's clear water nor the blue grove!'<i>Pah-hwat! </i>The blade begins to charge with lightning once more,'Shut up!'The Soul Hunter gets distracted by the view, as Kyeara leaps her blade raised to the sky.'We are the true owners here, we will do as we please!''Hmpf!'The two cross, 'Kehk'The Hunter falls limp.'Today I will rid of you!'Another charges, undaunted she spins to meet the as light and dark clash.-Grand father used to always say,'If you see injustice and choose to ignore..'Hunter pulls back the axe for a strike,'Die..e!''That you can not own the sacred blade, the acadium, Furgur!'<i>Pah-ang! </i>It is over now as the Hunter is toss as a rubble off his mount flying off at the impact of a blocked blade.  Last one standing conjures some courage,'Not bad, but don't compare me to the previous two'He begins to charge, the opposite direction away from Kyeara, knowing he's least smart enough to avoid death this day,'I'm not an idiot!  I'll come back for you, she-thug!''Tell your leader... Do not ever step foot upon this land... Let's go Morf'She notices the boy still scared, frozen on ground.  -...? !She kicks him as if she's attempting a field goal from a 40 yard ilne.'Wake up! This is the most barren of the Plane, the weak will die.  Without Strength, you will not survie.  You were lucky the ruckus caught my eye, or you would've been eaten'Bleu stares, lost.<p>Message Edited by Bleusong on <span class=date_text>08-08-2006</span> <span class=time_text>11:17 PM</span>

Bleusong
08-10-2006, 10:04 AM
<div></div>Bleu stares. On his knees and hands staring in to taken from landscape drawn of Salvador Dali.  Facing in to the distant rocks formed in various garden of rocks.'What is he trying to do?'-cute buttShe thinks.'If you don't want to find yourselves as tasty morsels for trash, hurry and leave.'A loud voice of a red, short and demon with a mohawk echos,'Thank you, but how do i get out of here?'Boy turns his eyes lighting up in inferno of determination with a quick <i>wheek!</i> turn of his head.<i>huhu, </i>breathes steady as he collects himself and stands quickly, fist tight.  Voice continues,'The Sky-Gate closed so we can't do anything, we came from the living lands and well, help us.  Heard there's a secret gate to the land below'The sprite continues to try and share his food with the giant white fuzzy critter Morf,'Try this, Try this'Kyeara, watches speachless pondering if they are all missing something,'...''Tell us, then as reward i'll give you a kiss!'-This is a once in a life time serviceDemon ponders in his own demonic way.<i>Phaaa-at. </i>Heavy thud.'!!'<div></div>Demon flies away his jaw shut by an upper cut of doom presented to him at the comment by Kyeara.'..!!'Sprite and Morf ponders at each other as the Demon disappears into the horizen.  Meanwhile, Morf and the sprite starts chasing after the red flying object.'From the living land? eheh.  Then the kid the Lord of all planes are seeking is that kid?  Wow... Came right through the clouds did ya... Pretty good! I'll introduce myself then.'She bends a knee, large blade tied by a chain at her hip crossing behind her back.  She opens her arm wide posing as her hair flows resting against the clouds.'I am grand daughter of past Sky Commander, General Whang.  Rightful owner of Acadium, blade of furgur, miss Kyeara !'Bleu slides a hand in his pocket thumb out, another hand through his hair repeats,'Kyeara...'-Perhaps, if I ask this girl, I could see Demica sooner.'If you are really such a person, perhaps you could send me where i wish to be? Anywhere...Whatever you wish....I will give to you... In return, will you take me to where the souls go when they leave?''....?'She studies him as Morf and the sprite looks dumbfounded, O.o.'It's just a misunderstanding...'Toad cries, on all fours in pain.<p>Message Edited by Bleusong on <span class=date_text>08-09-2006</span> <span class=time_text>11:55 PM</span>

Bleusong
08-10-2006, 10:53 AM
    -Page 2, Boy, Girl meets-    <i>!!    '</i>Grr. Will you not give up? Kyeara, ignore everything he says, don't listen to him.  Who's fault is it that we came up here crawling and sweating like niagara.  Breaking the Laws of both lands, if we can't take him back down everything will be ruined.'    'It's...True, true'    The sprite chimes in, though all ignore the comment.    'So the gate closes so we can't come or go but please, help us! That boy is right now giving up the destiny given to him as a human.  The reason...! I won't say it since you'll probably laugh.  Kyeara! Think about it.  He is looses his only life ever given to him in this silly play, how would our hearts survive after watching over him since the beginning... To us, that boy is more important than our own lives.  All beings have pain and sadness, but they fight it and win trying their best with effort...  Still that boy is different he doesn't have that.  <i>Sniff. </i>To us we have responsibilities til his destiny is lived out to protect him and be accountable.  Rain or snow.  Watching his life from the side is our only duty as his guardian faeries but he forsake us! <i>Huuuu...'    </i>The sprite and the devil begin to feel water swelling up in their eyes, the demon's shoulder slumps briefly as the sprite shake.    <i>Wah, Phee-et. </i>Unable to contain their remourse the demon and the sprite run toward each other needing a big hug and comfort.  They cry out in unison in a song,    'No one knows what it's like! To be~'    -[expletive haxx0red by Raijinn]..    Boy thinks before turning at a voice,    'Ha...Ha...Ha... Hey you, problem child !'    Kyeara blushes sweetly and continues,    'I have no idea of your issue but it's probably best you follow those faeries... Now! It's time to go back, cute prince'    The boy looks briefly surprised.    -I kinda like his cute face    She tilts her head down in focus    -Arr...If I fall now, all that effor becomes only play.  No, I can't give up now. Never.        'Alright! you can have everything I care about.  My mountain bike, Copy of 'Communist Menifesto', Jim Butcher's 'Dresden Files', Watch People's watch, Blackberry, all of it'    Demon holds his head going nuts.    'Really, you've made it big time girl, and more so than the toy sword you got, I have way better stuff. Lots of it. If you want you can have it all'    She winks, tilts her head dangerously,    'Huhut, toy sword, eh?'    <i>Ssss. </i>She begins to unsheath her sword.    <i>'</i>Acadium is considered one of Seven treasures of the sky.  Toy... That is bit much, knock it off !'    <i>Krrr'    '</i>Sky King has posted decree to kill the kid from the living everywhere, suppose he meant you !'    -...?!    Bleu stares back startled.    <i>Chhhhhhh. Panhg. </i>Beam of lightning follows the blade as she gracefully glides it over her head slicing the stone beneath her with ease.    'I don't know if you're worth it, but eventually if you stay, death will follow.  Now I'll send you back'    <i>Lrrrrrrrr. Wha.        </i>'Acadium...Please open the stars for me'    A breift current of sand flies past the boy and a beam of light uppears to shoot up.    '...? ?'    Faeries both look stunned.    'Ayat! That's the light from below!    Kyeara falls to her knees, clearly exhausted by the effort.    -Laters ! Eventually I'll see you again    'What the...'    Bleu looks up as the sand clears and falls.    'Secret only I know, it's what my grandfather used to use.  I doubt any other blade in the sky could open the path'    As the eyes and mouth open unimaginarily large the demon cries for joy,    'Wow, that is entirely too sexy.  Then... We can go back through that?'    "Yah, you're lucky you met me or something might've happened.  If you stay, with your abilities you coudln't surive a day.  So, better jump now...'    <i>Crash. Break of glass.  </i>No, something in Bleu.    'Ohhh-heh-heh-heh...This easy'    The demon skips along as though going for OZ.    Bleu slowly collects himself, NO!    'Who says? I will not go.'    Determined steps away.  His hand raised in a universally rude gesture'    'Eat this'    Stares focus on Bleu,    'Ha...Ha...?'    -Must meet...I can't go back down before i do...    <i>Shh    '</i>Kido, that's the wrong way....'    -Holy crap she's fast.    'Don't think you trust me but, I wasn't kidding.  Really there's alot of reward on your neck.  You stay and a fly has a longer life span'    'Don't give me that gimmick!  You're one of them right?  Everyone planned this against me.  Hm! No way.  By the way, you're ugly... Think I'm dumb enough for fall for that? Warning you now, stay out!'    She looks as though unclear what just happened.    'heh..What? He's like thralled or something'    Boy walks away, wide stride trying to look tough.  Stops briefly to glare at the Demon with cold blue pierce sparkled with a dare.  Demon just gives back the largest fact smile after last punch.    -huhut, Sucess    He realizes there's a rather large body of water before him.    -Water.  Weird.  There's crazy stuff up here in the sky.  Fine suppose I swim, I do need to get away now.    'Heh, will he be okay?'    Beaded eyes, blushing she looks at the boy go.    'Hm what...? That's...Dangerous.    Gets attention of the faeries collectively,    "Huh...?    'Said dangerous, dangerous.'    'What is? what is?'    .'....'<div></div>

Kerisan
08-11-2006, 06:29 AM
Wonderful story!

Bleusong
08-11-2006, 06:35 AM
<div></div><i>Shwaaaa...</i>The water sprays as a beast sprouts forth, it's star shaped mouth gleaming with thousand sharp teeth, it's beady eyes focused on prey.-Ek...!!!A tentacle like tongue hovers, extending without limit above Bleu as his ponders.  His body is nervous though, sweating profuciously and hands clasped,'Hahaha, I'm not falling for this magic...not...falling..'<i>Paht paht paht... </i>Boots clash as the warrior runs towards the naive bait.'Watch out!'<i>Kwang! </i>As she pushes him out of harms way of the falling tongue.  The three by standards, the red devil, the sprite and the white fuzzy Morf only drool,'Crap, The owner of the lake woke up...'-That's a freaking dinosaurBleu also slacked jawed, still unsure of what he is seeing,'You're joking right? really?'<i>Krrrrrr...</i>The monstrous tongue begins to rake the land chasing after the boy,'Hurry, if you get caught by that tongue, no way you're getting out of it'Bleu looks angry, 'Grrrr, who the hell are you, writing such a crappy novel...'<i>Pahpahpahpah...</i>Bleu runs from the largest tongue ever conceived,---...... Sits alone in front of the computer ... Ponders 'What?' ... <i>Tak ...</i> Shuts his window so no one can peek at him writing this story ---<i>Kwaaaaaaah...</i>'AAAKKKK! Save me, Ky'<i>Hut, Hut...</i> Bleu begins to sprint away from what appears to be a giant carot as it glides against dry land without limits while the Toad cheers him on reminding telling the beast of the lake the boy doesn't change his underware regularly and probably get sick if he ate the boy.'Move!'<i>Chhhhhhhhhhh... </i>Acadium glides against the sand as Kyeara draws a line to stop the advancement of the pink monster tongue before circling the blade in battle form before her,<i></i>'Just because the land lady cares for you doesn't mean you don't have to show some manners!'<i>Sh-oon, </i>The blade draws a symbol before Kyeara,'Fugur, Poena, Feritas!'Gathered energy begins to pull down as a pillar from the element, wind, water explodes, 'Aak..kh'Bleu covering his head, falls violently few feet ahead and falls unconcious once more, others looked touch as Kyeara gathers and weave energy against the foe,<i>Shhh...shht...-</i>Though I wander now without a home as my fate, my father, granfather were the greatest warriors...The beast, standing at full height from the sting, leaps high, tall as a small mountain.  It's bladed claws larger than Kyeara, staring back at her,'Really? Really don't change...often?''Huh?'The guardian spirits looks back at Ky briefly before apologizing to Kyeara while dragging Bleu back to the whole leading to the living lands,'Sorry Kyeara, we'll be taking off now, bit busy~'Kyeara stands alone, staring the giant froglike dinosaur standing full tower height down, err...up,'Alright toss him with your might'The guardians of Bleu try their best to toss their retainer but Bleu awakes and holds himself over the hole, spread eagle,'You dare...''[Removed for Content], Dumb.. What are you doing? Not tired of this?'Toad begins to jump on Bleu's abs to no avail as they notice Kyeara run past them.  She stops briefly and asks,'Havn't left yet?''Nope, no'Sprite replies before he turns and notices the enemy trailing Kyeara,'Morf!'She yells as the momentum of the dropping tongue causes disaray at Bleu's camp, causing all three to get bounced about by the vibration of the land, <i>Dodododood, </i>A cloud with legs and alot of fur begins charging full speed before it leaps, pulling Bleu away by the collar from the beast before he falls into the abyss of a dark evil mouth mid air, 'Fine, shall we dance?Kyeara turns, asking the walking Leviathan politely.<div></div><p>Message Edited by Bleusong on <span class=date_text>08-10-2006</span> <span class=time_text>09:19 PM</span>

Bleusong
08-11-2006, 08:09 AM
<div></div>    -Page 3, Wish to leave before it's late-    'So, perhaps I could stretch a bit...Been a while'    Kyeara stretches and exhales, letting her hair flow freely.  Her blade rests comfortable in her grip, her arm stretched to the sky,    '...'    <i>Khhuuuu... </i>The bests eyes her now.  It's tongue pointing out of it's starshaped mouth lined with saw-like teeth..<i>kkhhhh...</i> It's skin begens to stretch, small sproutling like heads with teeth starting to appear.      Bleu cries, calling for his mum as Morf drags him to safety.    <i>Shhhhhttttt...</i> The heads still attached, like eels begin to glide toward Kyeara, it's ruby eyes bright and focused,    'Huhut, The babes have to be ugly, taking after their mother.'    Kyeara grin confidently, gripping the giant blade in both hands as warning,    'Alright now class, today we'll learn etiquette,'    She charges at the flying heads, <i>khwakhwakhwakhwa..    </i>'The lesson will be taught by, Lady of Acadium, Kyeara herself'    The blade begins to spark and dance, cutting throught the bodies of the baby leviathan effortlessly guided by her hand,    -Have you ever seen such graceful lector?    She asks the readers,    <i>Phat, </i>It begins to rain demon tentacles with heads as she effortlessly spin and cut, each movement deliberate and precise,    Bleu turns and poses with giving her a thumbs up, impressed with a nod.  Toad yells at Bleu angrily asking,    'Why are you so, why?'    More splatter as it rains giant baby warms with big teeth surrounding a gaping hole, before one lands barely missing Bleu, <i>plap,    </i>'O.o...'    -Is this thing real?    He steps closerer and taps it with his foot carefully to be sure, <i>taptap,</i> before he starts kicking it violetly in interrogation,    '[Removed for Content], telling me the truthe!  You're all together right? Think I'll give up over this? No way, keep on dreaming fools!'    <i>Wiggle, </i>and Bleu freezes, <i>crash, </i>something inside Bleu drops a few beat, like his heart before a massive maw comes after him,    'It's not dead yet!!!'    Bleu begins to run once more turning momentarily at Toad with puppy eyes of plea,    'Toad~ My friend?'        'Hmpf, friend in a hurry? Don't come this way!'    'Fine, I'm not doing friends either'    That moment, Bleu feels  a sharp hit of his toe and falls while the flying warm passes over him with moment making it go after the guardian faeries,    'Aaaak! Go that way, please!'    Meanwhile, Bleu once more lifts himself up on his knees and hands, his eyes looking down at his hands as realization hits him,    'Crap, don't bite my tail, crap! Morf, Morf!!'    Bleu begins to tremble,        -[Removed for Content]    'Huuuuuuu...'    -What is this    'eeeeeeeeeee...'    -Magic girl, ugly men from some b-movie, now freaking dinosaurs...This can't be where the deads come..?  It's not what I've been taught...Not...Like...This...Didn't imagine cars or buildings.. But.. This is cartoon... Demica.. I came so far to meet you...    'Oi!'        Morf steps on the evil worm from hell with tip of Toad's tail still in its mouth and sprite still running, running,    'Ehhhhhhhhahhhhhhhhhnnnggggggg'    Bleu on his knees begins to lift his body bowing his neck to the sky with tears falling down his cheeks.    -Oh..Ot..Why...cry...no need to look so sad...    Guardians try to make sense of it while Morf takes his new catch by the tail and wanders off.    Bleu brings his hand to his forehead..his eyes teary, nose dripping..a wreck..    'Anyone help, it's fine, if i can only see Demica, just once.    -Demi...ca?    Kyeara studies the boy.    '...'    <i>Khhhhhhh....ahhhhh    '</i>Ak~ Kyeara, watch out...'    -!!        <i>Kwahng!    </i>Kyeara didn't see the part of avory that hit her as she gets knocked away.    'She's down..Kyeara..Down...Now..Now...Can't...Move...'     Toad begins to announce the obvious.    -!    Bleu blows his nose and wipes it with his finger while surveying after the comment.    'We better run, we die if we stay'    Bleu not convinced, notices the blade as it falls and buries itself halfway to the hilt.  He sees her unconcious and the giant eye looking at her gleeful.    '....'    Toad begins to stomp away angry,    '[expletive haxx0red by Raijinn], My fault for trying to convice the kid.  I give up now'    Sprite pleads,    'Don't go Toad, don't'    'No.  I'd rather get the punishment from the Devil's United Council.  Rather not die like a dog here'    'We can't let Bleu... Be alone.  We absolutely have to live our lives out with him.  If we don't protect him in this dangerous place'    -Who cares?    Toad stops, face in inferno now    -For the better.  He seemed determined to die anyways. Why not grant his wish?    He looks to the boy,    'Hey you, I'm off.  You try and find your way to either worlds.'    '...'    Bleu is standing now, his mind begining to unlock.    'Telling you now for sure, it's over between you and I.  Over.  Rather you cook rice or you cook beans, I am not going to care!'    Bleu begins to run now after sizing up the Leviathan. Sprints toward Acadium.    'Sometime when I had saved Demi,  I had done what my heart told me.  Bravest man, Bruce Lee of Justice! Going to save her.'    The gross tongue lands. <i>Khung.  </i>Inches toward Ky.    'Stop! Avenger of Justice, the warrior has pulled out Excalibur!'    <i>Phang. </i>The swords pulls out of land like radish from soil.    <div></div><p>Message Edited by Bleusong on <span class=date_text>08-11-2006</span> <span class=time_text>08:20 AM</span>

Bleusong
08-12-2006, 09:10 PM
    Bleu leaps before the leviathan,    'She may just be a bratty sorceress but I see her being eaten by you!'        He lands upon beat's squishy skin, his feet sinking with each step.  Undaunted Bleu charges up.    -Ha, this is like watching an ant take on an elephant.  Stop Bleu!    Toad panics as he watches Bleu propelled by determination sidestep carefully to the beasts head,    'Gah, how crazy can you get...? I won't care but you should hide you [expletive haxx0red by Raijinn]!'    -I...I'm always a brave man..of justice...whenever I met someone I always said these words..    Bleu shakes...    'I'm coming, toootooo meru peetaksree dungarooo pinopasha kakuri jab!'    He dives blade in hand and pierces the giant eye tall as he.    'Special mega happy punch~'    <div></div>

Bleusong
08-14-2006, 08:12 AM
<i>kwaaaaaaaah...</i>the leviathan let's out a furious roar.Toad's jaw drops!-Wow that kid! Planned for the eye. Perhaps not as dome as he looks. No, brillian.'That's a great plan! now go for the other eye!'Bleu gathers his form one more,'Now..to gather the chi once more...'He doesn't see the spawns piercing out of the great monster's head behind him as he starts his rambling words once more preparing for a strike.  Behind him the sprite begins to point and tries to communicate,'Bleu, behind, behind you.''Shut up, I still have to say the words...?'-[expletive haxx0red by Raijinn], annoying, asking me to look behind me'crap!'<i>shhhhh....</i>The eel like body attached to a hold of grinding teeth comes at Bleu at full speed taking a bite of his shoulder before preparing the second strike!'ak!'The guardians simultanious shouts for Bleu to flee,'Psh, don't worry of me! I won't run as a coward!'-Come to me, ugly.Bleu readies his form, Acadium held at his waist pointed away, pulls it back as if a baseball bat.'I'll show you my last hidden card.  When I met the toughest opponents, I would call upon these magic words!'He swings the blade forth, his face contorted in determination and anger!'Over-eat!'In that instant the blade comes flaring alive, catching the eel-ling squarely, slicing through easily as though a bar of butter against a heated knight. 'Haha! My thoughts exactly because I'm a man of justice!...now it's for your other eye...Watch carefully, soon your world will be cloaked in darkness...'Before Bleu can ready his final thrust two more eel-like critters spawn through the great beast's skin wrapping about his body, forcing him to drop the sword.  He's now held up high being crushed, his liver being squeezed.  Slowly the small spawns begin to move toward the leviathan's great mouth..'Crap, it's over.  Can't believe we've lost him in a place like this.  Though he was frustrating at times, he was a really good boy.  Had he only not been so stubborn'Bleu begins to hyperventilate, still thinking how filthy the inside of this great beasts mouth must be. <i>Pahpatpatpatpat.'</i>It's not over yet!'Kyeara, reagained her conciousness, leaps lead by the dropped Acadium now firmly in place in her small hands.Raises her blade, 'Sea and east!'Brings the blade before her, 'Fire wind!', 'Flight!', 'Gate!'She spins her thoughts pleading the blade to blow away the beast without even a trace.  Acadium spins with her, drawing a ring of fire before she strikes the blade forth with a great beam of fire.'Disappear!<i>Shhhoooo.  Pha-Ahm! </i>The beast begins to disintergrate with piercing cry of pain, Bleu still held by the two eel tentacles being dragged toward the mouth.'Idiot! Now Bleu is in danger too!'Toad lets out an uncontrolled out burst.  Still Kyeara is ready this time she jumps, arms open wide.  He is caught midair.-Don't dieShe focuses once more as gravity pulls both down.'Morf!'The giant fuzzy white simple bear looks up briefly puzzled.  Toad reminds him,'Morf, she's calling you...'The panda-like bear inhales quickly twice, <i>Ha-ak, Ha-ak.'...!!'</i>It simple falls on its back, it's short arms and legs(compared to his body) spread wide to offer a safe cushion. She lifts herself up before him, her hand on his chest checking for pulse before announcing,'It's fine, he's alive'Toad begins to sob uncontrolled, while the sprite calls Toad a dummy.'Just a bit ahead, there's a castle.  Best we go rest there for now'-Saved me..., Thanks...Bleu?...I'll remember it for now.She looks down content.<div></div>

PookaSma
08-20-2006, 07:43 PM
<P>Oh my, this is so exciting! Keep going Bleu...</P> <P> </P> <P>~Kyeara</P>

Stealth Status
08-21-2006, 10:52 PM
<div></div><div></div>Maybee I am missing something.What is up with the missing conjuctions and pronouns?Not sure, are you an  E.S.L. person, or is this a weird style type you are writing in.<div></div><p>Message Edited by Stealth Status on <span class="date_text">08-21-2006</span> <span class="time_text">11:53 AM</span></p><p>Message Edited by Stealth Status on <span class=date_text>08-21-2006</span> <span class=time_text>11:55 AM</span>