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piro
01-31-2006, 02:55 AM
<div></div><div> This story is the first I've ever written the punctuation is bad  and IM not sure how it flows any critisizm would be much appreciated</div><div> </div><div> </div><div><font color="#ffffff"></font> </div><div><p><font size="3"><font face="Times New Roman"><font color="#ffffff"><span>           </span>My name Cour Mynn of the shadow bane, not a suitable name for a frog you say well there’s a story behind how I came to have this name. quite some time ago long before my time there was a cleric that went by this name a powerful cleric to say the least, he was a high elf of the highest order in felwithie protecting the paladins and warriors through there various quest for nobility he was gifted by the gods they say no other cleric had seen or claimed as many victories in battle as he had till one day he was ask to do a very horrible thing for the one he loved, she told him that the gods were to blame for her sickness and that they had told her it was to keep him strong within the faith he had this disturbed the cleric he could not understand why the<span>  </span>gods would dangle such a trivial thing such as love from his grasp needles to say he after many years of thought decided to destroy the gods for the insolence and crimes against him so he traveled to the planes and destroyed them one by one the avatars fell then he was summoned to the court of the gods to be punished for his crime for centuries they argued back and forth he was lucky enough to win several of the gods over them not knowing what the others had done favors were placed on the cleric for protection from the more hostile gods this enraged them of coarse and an epic battle began in the<span>  </span>heavens after the battle was over the cleric still stood torn and broken from the fighting but still enough strength to do what he had longed to do from the very beginning with his mighty hands raised a voice spat spells in all known languages the heavens begin to tremble and the gods feared this entity that stood before them they were powerless against him now as they stood there motionless unable to stop him he cried as he accused them of there wrong doings and cured them not just any curse but a curse that would forever adhere to them telling them that he would be reborn in a form that they would least expect and take control of all lands destroying everything and everyone they had helped or hindered in there time the gods shook with fear because now the see that this cleric was something more then even they could have imagined <span> </span>it is said that an arrow from lucan himself was the final blow that killed the cleric and released the gods they were thankful of this act and gave lucan control over Freeport and all evil races saying that he needed to build his armies that the cleric would return to destroy him. </font></font></font></p><p><font size="3"><font face="Times New Roman"><font color="#ffffff"><span>           </span>This being said it brings the story back to me I was born in a war my parents both died my family killed by lucan and spit on by the families of qeynos the gods are gone and whatever reason I live in the forest not bound by Freeport nor qeynos I practice all day everyday the arts of a priest though my arts do heal I ve found it very easy to warp the spells into death at first just farmers animal gnolls orcs whatever I could find to kill I would as the years went on I grew more and more powerful the aura that I surround my self with brings death to any that touch it as I walk through the forest all life ceases to exist the guards paladins shadow knights warriors necromancers wizards they fall easily I I don’t even bother looking at them anymore ive seen ever dieing face there is and it has become boring now I just walk through the outlying towns of the cities and watch as all who are around die before me the funny thing is no one relies what’s going on till its to late the cities just think it’s a plaugue of some sort I don’t want to go into the main cities yet tere is still much for me to learn and though I really don’t believe there to be even alittle trouble I am no fool both Freeport and qeynos have there dark secrets hidden beneath the city for centuries waiting for an opponent that presents its self worthy to die by there hands I don’t fear these thing I am just not going to lose this fight they all must be destroyed before my time is up </font></font></font></p></div>